NaNoWriMo 2019 ~ two week update ~

November 16, 2019April 2, 2020 ~ britneyshae ~ Leave a comment

Hello and welcome to Day 16 of NaNoWriMo! Hopefully it’s been another happy week for all my fellow NaNoWriMo-ers out there!

I think I told you all last week that I live for NaNoWriMo. It feels like it’s made for me. I am a fast drafter (and if that makes you jealous, just keep in mind that it means I’m a slow reviser because, whew, my first drafts are nightmares!) so getting 2,000 – 5,000 words a day isn’t too difficult for me (I averaged a little over 3000 words per day this NaNoWriMo).

You might have noticed what I did right there – averaged, past-tense.

That’s because, dear readers, I reached 50,000 yesterday! Woo hoo!! Not only that, but (despite my pantser ways), I was able to draft this “just for fun” MS in a way that it wrapped up clearly at the 50,000 word count. So I also finished my NaNo project!

As a reminder, in case you missed last week’s post, I wrote a totally for fun Christmas story with equal parts romance and gothic murder mystery. And a bonus love triangle.

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I thought about updating my aesthetic to match Act 3, which was ALL DARK, ALL GOTHIC, but I’m lazy, so here’s the same Christmas-y aesthetic from last week!

Okay, let’s get to the recap.

NaNoWriMo 2019 – Week Two

As I just said above, Act 3 got a bit dark. I went way off the notes I’d written during “Preptober.” Oh well, this MS will never see the light of day so it’s fine!

Here’s a day-by-day breakdown:

Saturday, November 9
Words Written: 5,045
Total Count: 29,107

I really killed it Saturday. I was trying to get to 30,000, because I felt like if I was in the 30,000 word count come Monday, I could definitely wrap this NaNoWriMo project up by Friday, which was my goal all along. If you’ll recall from last week, I was STOKED for a new project. But more on that in a bit.

To get this pretty hefty word count, I wrote 2,000 words in the morning and then sat down to do a few more words in the afternoon and got on a roll. Like I said, I wanted to push for 30,000, but whew, I was exhausted after that.

Sunday, November 10
Words Written: 4,247
Total Count: 33,354

I had brunch with a friend on this day, so I did 1,000 words before brunch and then 1,000 after. And then, you guessed it, I kept plugging along into the afternoon. I think my main motivation at this point was wanting to finish on Friday so I would write enough that the NaNoWriMo stats page reflected that I’d finish on November 15.

Monday, November 11
Words Written: 3,064
Total Count: 36,418

Alright. Monday. If I’m recalling correctly, I wrote my 1,000 in the morning, my second 1,000 on my lunch break, as was my NaNoWriMo plan (which I stuck very much with, thank you very much). I was able to get about an additional 500 words written during my lunch break, so when I got home that evening, I sat my butt down and forced another 500 words for the 3,000 total. I also wrapped up Act 2 and moved into my very odd and dark Act 3.

Also it snowed on Monday which is what I get for writing a Christmas story. *eye roll*

Tuesday, November 12
Words Written: 3,582
Total Count: 40,000

Okay, y’all. I did not set out on Tuesday to write 3,500 words or to reach 40,000 words. On this particular day, I got to work early to write my morning 1,000, went to update my word count on NaNo’s site… and discovered that SOMETHING WONKY happened with the site and it said I had 38,000 words, which was NOT the case. And at this time, I could not go back in and change my word count by day (they changed it later in the week, but ugh, it’s so complicated and took me FOREVER to do). Since I didn’t want negative words, I had to write greater than 38,000 words. So I pushed myself to get to 40,000. And then the site only reflected that I’d written, like, a little over 1,000 words. It was a sad day. But, hey, I ended up writing more than I might have originally written!

Wednesday, November 13
Words Written: 3,020
Total Count: 43,020

So by this point in the game, I knew I was going to have to continue to write 3,000 words+ if I wanted to reach 50,000 by Friday. So I wrote 2,000 in the morning and another 1,000 on my lunch break.

Thursday, November 14
Words Written: 4,066
Total Count: 47,086

Ah. Thursday. Oh, Thursday. So by this point I knew that in order to hit 50,000 words on Friday I would need to have a 3,000 word day and a 4,000 word day. So I again wrote 2,000 words in the morning and then another 1,000 on my lunch break… knowing I’d have to write another 1,000 at some point.

And then… well, let’s back up a bit. As you recall from my mention above, the reason I wanted to get to 50,000 so badly on Friday was so I could start focusing on the new project I’d come up with last week. Here’s the problem with the idea I’d had last week: I couldn’t figure out how to pitch it in a way that made it… um… worth anyone’s time. I had these vague emotions I wanted to explore, and essentially I was pitching it (to my boyfriend and my friend) as “a story about a girl dealing with change.” WOW. SO SPECIFIC. Okay, it also had a wakeboarding element and a punny team name and fresh water turtles. But that’s about all I had.

So here I am, rushing through NaNoWriMo so I can start working on this project but every time I took to my notebook to write down pitch ideas… it fell flat.

Then Thursday came. And while listening to a podcast, I suddenly got this idea for a rom com. Well, I don’t write rom com, so I tried to take the flicker of rom com idea and translate it to YA contemporary, aka what I do write.

The idea that followed is nothing like the original rom com spark, but… wow. I like it. A lot. And I’m VERY excited to work on it, way more excited than I was for my other idea!

Aka I needed to get through NaNoWriMo. So when I got home Thursday evening, I wrote another 1,000 words. The finish line was in sight!

Friday, November 15
Words Written: 2,358
Total Count: 50,444

Woo hoo! 50,000 words! My biggest challenge here was figuring out if I wanted to hit the 50,000 word mark at work or wait and do it at home. I wrote 2,000 words in the morning, wrote a few on my lunch break, and then, you know, because it was Friday, I ended up pulling it up at 3:30 and got to 50,000 at 4:00 p.m. *Kool-aid man OH YEAH*

I also typed “THE END” on this very strange gothic Christmas tale of romance and woe!

And that wraps up my 2019 NaNoWriMo experience! Which… is kind of a bummer. To be honest, my ACTUAL plan was to take it slow and easy, write 2,000 words a day, and finish around November 25, aka right before Thanksgiving. But, alas, I got carried away.

Going into next week, I’ll start outlining my new idea (yes, yes, I am a pantser, but it does save me time to have *~*some idea*~* of where I’m going – but I rarely, if ever, follow the outline). Although, to be completely honest, I outlined this NaNo idea (following the briefest, simplest of the 3-Act Structure) and I stuck to the outline until Act 3! (Then things went totally off the handle.)

I hope everyone is having a fun NaNoWriMo regardless of word count. I think sometimes we get caught up on whether we’re behind or not proceeding the way we hoped that we forget to have fun! Which is partially why I’m glad I wrote such a silly for fun MS this NaNo.

Good luck everyone!

05.18.17 – Writing when your life is incredibly busy

May 18, 2017April 2, 2020 ~ britneyshae ~ Leave a comment

I’m currently in the middle of moving and exactly a week today I begin my travels for my much-awaited Disney Baltic Sea Cruise. Boxing up all my stuff, moving it into my new apartment, and prepping for Europe in two weeks? Plus working a full time job that’s fairly demanding? However am I supposed to write?

Before I list out some ideas on how to sneak in a few words despite a busy schedule, I do have to admit that sometimes I do “writing activities” that aren’t actually writing but make me feel like I’m being productive. I’ll touch base with fellow writers on Scribophile and do some critiques of other writer’s works there. I’ll hash out some ideas with friends while we’re hanging out or via email. And I’ll complain about writing to my boyfriend even though I’m not actually writing (that’s productive, right?). Even 15 minutes of critiquing someone else’s work on Scribophile helps me earn points (or “karma” as it’s called on Scribophile) which allows me to later post my work for critiquing. So ultimately it’s still about my work.

Anyway, without further ado, here are a few of my personal tips for getting some words written despite a crazily busy schedule.

(1) Utilize that lunch break. Get an hour for lunch? That’s an hour you can be writing. Or even thirty minutes you can be writing. Or, heck, fifteen minutes. Whatever you can squeeze in. I pack my lunch every day and once the noon bell rings I eat at my desk and pull up my manuscript. My productivity level varies, but I will tell you that I was averaging 1000 – 3000 words on my lunch break during NaNoWriMo. Not too shabby. Bonus points? Your boss might assume you’re working.

(2.) Skip the TV watching. I know, I know, it’s great to just get home from a long day at work and mindlessly watch some TV. My guilty pleasure is The Bachelor (not afraid to admit it). But the Bachelor is only on Monday nights (starting next week yay!) so what’s my excuse for the rest of the nights? Instead of watching an hour of mindless TV, limit yourself. Don’t Netflix binge. Watch one episode or even a half of an episode. Or write during commercial breaks.

(3.) The Self-Control App. Have you ever found yourself without wifi connectivity on your laptop and discovered that you’re actually way more productive without the interwebs at your fingertips? The Self-Control App works the same way, while allowing you to use Spotify or Pandora, which are websites I use for some inspiring music while writing. I had a roommate during law school who used this app when she was studying for tests or finals, and I used it daily while studying for the Bar Exam. It’s helpful not only in that it blocks out your distractions (which you can set yourself to create the ultimate distraction-free setup) but also, for me, acts as a timer and lets me know when I can take a break. For example, during my study sessions for the Bar Exam, I set the Self-Control App at 2 hours. I would study nonstop for those 2 hours and as soon as the time was up and my web applications were unlocked, I took a fifteen minute break to check my email and browse through social media and what have you. It works that way for writing, too—only got an hour to write? Set that Self-Control app up for an hour to keep yourself on schedule.

(4.) Leave your house. Guys, I cannot tell you how many times leaving my house has increased my productivity levels. When I’m home, all of a sudden I’m looking for any excuse to do anything other than write. Oh, does the whole house need to be clean? I’ll start cleaning. Oh, there’s the TV glaring at me. I’ll just watch one show. Just one. Etc. etc. etc. When I’m home, there are distractions all around me. Family members, boyfriends, roommates, etc. etc. etc. I know this list is full of tips on how to write when you’re insanely busy and it’s hard to find time to leave the house, but if you have an hour free, it’s an easy way to practically ensure you won’t spend that hour watching TV or cleaning out the fridge (that can always be done later, trust me). Plus, if I’ve gone to Starbucks, or Panera, or Barnes & Noble’s café (my personal favorite but their internet is always sluggish), that means I’ve spent some money on some drink. I don’t want to feel like I’ve not only wasted my time but also wasted money. So it’s an extra incentive to get to work.

(5.) Reward yourself. I don’t actually do this, but I’ve heard it said time and time again that if you know you’ll get a reward, you’re more than likely to want to earn that reward. Set up a reward system. Maybe you treat yourself to a writing session at Starbucks after you’ve written a certain amount of words where you’ll get that venti iced chai tea latte with soy (my go-to). Making goals and rewarding yourself isn’t just about the rewards—it’s also about the goals. Just setting up a list of goals in and of itself helps you see your project big-picture and see where you need to go. Write it out. Then you can see how far you have to go but also see your progress. And progress is rewarding in itself, am I right?

And there you have it. My tips to being productive and getting some writing done even when you’re insanely busy. I will make a confession though: other than the writing on my lunch break thing, I haven’t been utilizing any of these tips. But making this list helped remind me that it’s important to be productive, and while it’s hard to start now with a vacation looming over my head, I can’t wait to get a fresh start in June!

Happy writing!

04.17.17 – Revision, Revision, Revision

April 17, 2017April 2, 2020 ~ britneyshae ~ Leave a comment

Have you ever had to kill a character? And I’m not talking about killing the character within the bounds of your manuscript – you know, causing him or her to be killed in an automobile accident, or by a shooting, or heart attack. I’m talking about creating a character and then taking away his entire existence.

Removing him from the manuscript, removing him from being a character at all. Killing a character at least gives him a place – removing him takes him from being something to being nothing.

A friend of mine recently read through one of my works and suggested merging two of the characters into one character. At first I was shocked – she wanted to me to get rid of one of my characters? In a way, it was like getting rid of two of my characters. And I’m not talking minor characters here. Well… okay, they’re kind of minor, but at least one of them appears in every chapter. And she wanted me to just merge them into one?

Once the initial shock of the idea wore off, though, I realized that I kind of liked it. I kind of liked the idea. I even jotted it down in my notes for something to consider.

A few days later, I had the most generous, sweet literary agent ever provide me with some notes on my manuscript (and the politest rejection of representation I’m likely to ever receive – which, you know, stung, but I’ll take the gift of all of her super helpful notes), and I realized she was essentially suggesting the same thing – that I could merge these two characters. (I don’t know that she actually suggested merging, but she suggested that I didn’t need them in the way they existed in that draft.)

And so, for about a week now, I have been dutifully working on a major revision of my novel. A major revision.

Guys, I’ve never done a major revision before. I’ve never merged two characters into one. So far it’s been a bit easier than I was originally imagining, but every time I do a find + replace to merge the character into one (I took one character’s first name and combined it with the other character’s last name) I do feel a little sad. I want to cling to the novel as it was, the novel I was so proud of.

I’ve also been compiling new songs into the playlist for this novel, adding the new in with the old. The entire mood of the playlist is changing, just like the tone of the novel is changing. It’s not the novel I wrote as a break from studying for the Bar Exam anymore.

But, I do believe it’s going to be a better novel. It is a different novel, but it’s a better novel. And, on the bright side – it’s the first time I’ve been truly excited about this novel since I finished it back in 2014. So – guess I’ll keep on killing of that character. Or, well, parts of both characters…

04.13.17 – Keeping Yourself Accountable

April 13, 2017April 2, 2020 ~ britneyshae ~ 1 Comment

How do you guys keep yourselves accountable when it comes to writing? I have to admit, I’m not particularly good at it. It seems like some months (or weeks) I just have better success with writing than others. Sometimes I can’t stop clicking away at the keyboard… and other times I just stare at that blinking cursor.

One way I keep myself accountable is by the use of a Bullet Journal. I have two bullet journals that I keep with me at all times – my daily bullet journal, which acts as a planner, and my writing bullet journal, which is where I jot down notes here and there. I don’t use my writing bullet journal regularly at all and unlike my daily bullet journal, which I spend hours and hours designing, coloring, and drawing out perfectly straight lines with a ruler, my writing bullet journal is not pretty or decorative at all. Half the time I only use black pens and don’t even jazz it up with color.

It’s through my daily bullet journal, though, not my writing bullet journal, that I try to keep myself accountable when it comes to writing. Every month, I, along with many other bullet journalers out there, do a “habit tracker” where I track my habits. For me, this includes making my bed (which I have done since starting a habit tracker without fail), eating at home (I used to eat out so much – and still kind of do), flossing (eek!), exercising (which I’m also bad at doing, excluding my weekly tennis lessons), taking vitamins, and then reading and writing.

I think reading is just as important as writing. I could write an entirely new blog post on how I went from bookworm to hardly ever picking up a book. I’ve been trying to change that and forcing myself to read more and enjoy more books, so I also track accountability on reading.

Here’s where my April tracker is thus far:

As you can see, I don’t write every day. The worst part is, I used to be incredibly strict about how I marked off for writing in my tracker – that meant I had to have written 500 words or more of a current WIP or a new story. This month, I have changed it up a bit – if I write something, even something short, that I’m proud of, I mark off for writing. If I work on editing, I mark off for writing. If I draft up a query or something to that extent, I mark off for writing. Still, we’re about halfway through April and I’ve only “written” 6 times??

The more alarming revelation from my tracker is how little I’ve read this month. I wish I had a picture of the pile of books by my bed, all of which I have at least glanced at (and one which sustained some severe water damage – can’t wait to explain that to my librarian), but none finished. I go through these phases where I just can’t seem to get into anything…

…that said, even though I have done a limited amount of reading this month, I have been reading more of the genre that I want to write, and while I obviously do not steal the voices from the authors in my own writing, I do feel as though reading works by others helps make my own writing stronger. This isn’t a new revelation, but something I have to work hard to keep in mind.

Back to writing. Another way I’ve tried to hold myself accountable is by setting a daily word goal or the like, and detailing in a calendar view how many words for that day I wrote. Let me put it this way – this never works out for me. Ever. (1) I don’t like to force myself to write if I’m not feeling it and (2) even if I do write every day, I’ll forget to update the calendar.

Here’s my example from this past November, when I completed NaNoWriMo:

NaNo Tracker

According to my stats from this past year’s NaNo, I reached 50,000 words by November 15, and it looks like I updated my word count every day. However, this is not revealed by looking at this calendar – which clearly just goes to show that I stopped updating.

I’ll keep playing around with ways to keep myself accountable. I know many people have writer friends, but my writer friends and myself seem to encourage each other not to write sometimes (haha) because we know how difficult it can be. In the meantime, my tracker is a pretty good indication to me on whether or not I need to get my butt into gear and… WRITE!

(Don’t be this guy ha! :))

*In case anyone is worried about this Peter fellow and why my bullet journal indicates I’m traveling to see him or at his place, he’s just my boyfriend. We’re long distance – talk about interfering with my writing schedule! But, I do come up with some good ideas on the 4-hour drive to see him! 🙂

04.08.17 – Camp NaNo

April 8, 2017April 17, 2017 ~ britneyshae ~ Leave a comment

I signed up to participate in Camp NaNoWriMo for the first time this year, setting a very reachable goal of 10,000 words for what was my 2015 NaNo novel, On the Inside Looking In (OTILI). I’m probably 80% through the first draft, but I’ve been “stuck” for a while, only writing a few pages intermittently. OTILI is a project I have a lot of excitement about, though – it’s sort of a YA thriller about returning to the small-town the main character spent her childhood in, only to realize the town has a weird hierarchical order, which apparently was strengthened after the murder of her mother’s classmate. Here’s a draft of a query-like synopsis I jotted down on my iPhone during a hockey game:

Brie Thompson’s mother has disappeared. This isn’t unusual – Carrie Thompson has disappeared and reappeared throughout Brie’s life, leaving her in the care of her step-father. This time is different though: Brie’s maternal grandparents have fought for her custody, and Brie let them win.

Now Brie has been plucked out of her senior year of high school and brought to Bonnyville, Illinois, her childhood home and the small town her mother grew up in. Brie is thrilled to leave her life behind and return to Bonnyville, finally living the life she always wanted to live. She instantly connects with her childhood best friend, Bethany Lewis, the daughter of her mother’s own childhood best friend, Bridgett. Life with Bethany seems perfect…until things start to seem a little too perfect. Weirdly perfect.

It’s minor at first: the town’s weird obsession with order, Bethany’s assurance that Brie must be a cheerleader and follow every high school stereotype, and the utter distaste displayed toward Brie by the honor students in Brie’s AP classes. According to these honor students, Brie is “one of them.” One of the “chosen ones.”

As Brie urges to befriend these classmates, and especially the cute, melancholy Sawyer Hartman, the town’s inner-workings begin to unravel, and at the heart is the unsolved murder of Sawyer’s older sister… a murder Brie’s mother allegedly witnessed 18 years ago, only to later claim she never saw anything at all.

ON THE INSIDE LOOKING IN is the story of a small-town whose residents never leave, trapping everyone in with order and secrets.

I’m so excited by the premise! (Is it normal for a writer to get excited by her own novel’s premise?) Now… if only I could get the ending wrapped up in a nice, tidy manner. It’s going to be a lot to edit, too.

Guess it’s time to get to work!